Tuesday, May 13, 2025

R Bremner

Nightwings


nightwings

we swooped

the avenue

slanting desire, vague

molten, pulsing swells

while city midnights drank

moonlight rock’n’roll 



(first published in Verse-Virtual) 




Jimi


Frontiers in the wind cry

steeping into the colors of the light

while crossing traffic to that place

of changes, voodoo chile and voodoo 

children who were stone free,

whilst you beamed down rainbows

and built bridges from on high to 

our third stone from the sun.

Foxy ladies and Mary dreamed with

you while you watched Joe escape

down Mexico way in yet another dream

through those gypsy eyes, eyes that 

burned through a haze of purple, 

that burned like a midnight lamp

in a nook in a watchtower, watching

and witching for a princess

and you were the prince,

the knight who slayed our

monster, manic depression.

 



White Mice 

 

Early 1980. 

I live in a house owned by the rent-a-car business next door, 

which they’re only keeping till they can tear it down for

their expansion.

The bathroom upstairs

 leaks into my kitchen, and

 roaches wander in droves

through the night.

At least there’s heat, though the landlord 

harangues me to push it down, while

the Puerto Rican family upstairs 

harangues me to push it up.

The sun pours through my

kitchen window on a Saturday morn,

while I write, as always with

my radio on.

College station. WMSC.

 

I hear it. Unreal.

 

First, the drums rat-tat-tating

into a tease of

that nasty, taunting

bass line.

Then a guitar clangs in,

But only to punctuate the bass.

The bass carries the day.

Then, with no warning, that

voice from another planet,

that voice that rings and rattles

like no other I’ve heard.

 

The Mo-dettes.

The song is “White Mice”.

And soon I am hearing it everywhere.

At the Dirt Club, at Eats-U-Want Café,

in little pop-up punk joints in

the East Village, and on all the college 

stations I listen to. 

 

 There’s something about that voice…

At once a shy little girl and a naughty woman.

I later learn that she is Swiss, not only with

a flighty accent, but also with a trace of a 

speech impediment which makes discerning  

the lyrics an impossible chore .

 

But we can imagine all sorts of poetry in them, 

from Beat to Surreal to Dada to anything.

 

My buddy, Lodi Poet Laureate Ed O’Connor, 

insists he hears a reworking of Rimbaud’s Season 

In Hell with more sophisticated sophistry.

 

I figure it’s something like Subterranean Homesick 

Blues, only updated with a New Wave sensibility.

 

Mickey Music on Main Ave tells me there is no album

yet. But they do have the single. I buy it.

 

On the flip side is “Masochistic Opposite”.

This side is excellent too, but 

the only words I can make out are the title.

 

I listen and listen to that record, but it is the

early eighties, life is full, and eventually

I am on to other things.

 

Fast forward to 2010.

It is now standard fare to look up

ancient song lyrics on the web.

I have not thought about White Mice in

years, but one day it creeps into focus.

 

So I look it up.

I am flabbergasted.

Stupider, more idiotic, more senseless

lyrics could not be written!

Jane Crockford, Kate Korris, were you

really such asinine bimbos?

Damn!  Was I listening to this claptrap

for so long, being such a stupid fool

as to admire it? 

Betrayal!

 

After a few days I am thinking. Actually,      

arguing with myself. Was not punk the ideal 

of stupidity, the revolt against intellectuals

and the elites?

 

Think of  Gang of Four with their ponderous anti-lyrics

in songs like “Ether” and “Natural’s Not in It”. Or the

Sex Pistols. When they told us they were “Pretty Vacant”,

who could deny that? And the Angry Samoans?. 

And the Cramps? The Revilos? And so forth.

 

But wait a  minute.

There was intellectual punk, too.

What about 

the brilliant Pete Shelley of the Buzzcocks? 

Something Goes Wrong, I Believe, Orgasm Addict?

Harmony in My Head?,

And Howard Devoto, I am on fire and it’s the

rainy season.

 

So I can listen to White Mice. And know that 

Crockford is no poet. And pretend that Ramona

is singing some foreign language. And such,

my friends, is post-post-post-post punk rationalized

life. 


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